Today we are learning about how to write strong paragraphs.The red writing are supporting the details and facts. The green writing supports my own thinking and facts. And the blue writing is supporting the main idea
My Day
Today was Friday the 26th of March and this was Tangaroa’s 3rd and final day of gymnastics. A group in Tangaroa was getting ready for gymnastics.
The group headed off to gymnastics. We walked on the footpath and crossed roads but finally we were there. They did the roll and everyone went inside the building. We spent an hour doing gymnastics moves that were taught by the instructors on all of the gym equipment.
I felt tired and excited because the adrenaline kept me going. The sound in the gym was deafening as everyone was enjoy
After gymnastics we walked back and on the way the group heard fire alarms. The next thing we saw were two big fire trucks heading to the school. We entered the school and went into the classroom to have lunch
Alexa
