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Friday, May 21, 2021

Running the length of New Zealand.

 Running the length of New Zealand.



I heard the huffing and puffing of the other kids as they ran past me. I felt the cold air breezing through my hair. I felt my heartbeat increase as I ran around the school.

I was feeling lonely running along the long fence line, I felt the cold breeze wrapping around my knees as I ran around the track, Pitter patter went the feet as I caught up to the rest of the group, The wind was as cold as ice as i ran through the freezing cold conditions, I ran past the abandoned cold wet playground and felt the cold air puncturing my lungs, I tried ignoring the pain but it was as painful as a punch, I had caught up to my friend Aliana who had told me it was Cold as a dogs nose, We ran around for the second time, Aliana said that Maia is a cheetah, Aliana and I had caught up to Maia and we all ran together, “Im freezing” Said one of the kids as I ran past them.

A cold frozen teardrop poured from the sky as I looked up at the cold weather. “It's raining cats and dogs!” said Aliana as we ran around the track another time.

5 comments:

  1. Hey,😁 good job I luv the multi color

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  2. Hiiiiiiiiiiiii Alexa its me here Elouise I love the coloures

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    1. Kia ora Elouise, Thank you for commenting on my story. Im glad you like the colours.

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  3. Hey Alexa Love the colours great job on colours!

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